My newest sig + avatars... ;) please C'n'C

[Garis]

So here is my latest siganture... personally I like it.. but what do you think?

Also you can remember some older sigs and now you can see avatars that I made from sigs.. its just little edited fragments, but its also an avatars showcase arena and I use it as a picture on the skype..
So here it is:
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You wont remember the 3rd avatar becouse the whole sig is not finished...

···THANK YOU···

[NSR]

Very original IMO...
Nice work but effects need some work...
Your best perhaps

[Garis]

My 3rd in a row in "best"
I am getting better...
thank you...
NSR, special thank for you becouse of pink cap on the girl in last sig...
so maybe you(or anybody other) can say how can I improve my EFFECTS on this one?

[MaиυfacтυязdÐязaм♥]

I only see the avies although they are very nice avies.. I'm pretty bad at making avies they seem to be MUCH harder then sigs. Good work ^_^ and I like 2nd one best nice text and colors. =]

[Fur]

The sig is pretty nice just dont have a set focal point IMO, the avies are really good and i like the 2nd one the best very good job keep up the work.

[Garis]

Thank you everyone..

Maybe can anybody help me with EFFECTS?

[Daemon]

I dont like it cuz there isn a really focal point my eyes are just flying around un controlled

[Garis]

I dont like it cuz there isn a really focal point my eyes are just flying around un controlled

So maybe I will hear some advices? huh? Or maybe some effects? please...
I know that you are right, cuz you are much better and have more XP than me, so maybe you will help to me with this one?

[LoganGFX]

the sig would be great on Myspace or a brochure or something like that. Its very crisp, clean, artsy. But as a sig, theres just too much going on in it. 2 pictures, 2 postage stamp thingies, big text, etc. In sigs, try to focus on one area that you want ppl's eyes to stick to.

and I love the 2nd avatar

[Bloodshot]

I agree, you need to work on making your focal point stand out, but still be blended as a sig, pick a general spot that you really want to stick out, a cool effect, part of a render etc, um you can do that by toning down the busyness in your sigs, dont use so many effects and stay away from real abstract lines, etc.