Come with me

[Pet]

I wanted to try to make a business card for myself, so I gave it a shot. As I was working on this, I was wondering what I would do for a logo, and I decided to have just an idea as my logo, that I can change depending on the situation. The logo I am using is the collar and tag that is in my avatar as well as my card design.

Anyways, before I bore you, here is my design, any comments are welcomed.

[Henry]

i really like this, very clean and nice color choice.
the character is perfect, seems like its welcoming the customer in

[Bloodshot]

It's really cool, its not exactly a practical business card like.. cuz there is no info on it =PP but its nice, could have seen a mouth or a nose tho ^^ just my opinion, its nice, if you really love gfx designing, i can guarantee you will get noticed somehow and will get a sweet job

[Pet]

Thanks for the comments.

Bloodshot, someone said that to me already, but I would just put all the contact information on the back side. Having any more text than Digital Ecstasy would ruin the art I think. ^^

[Tie Ninja]

im not a big fan of anime but thats me. But i think you did a good job with the girl and i like the colors you used for the bg.
which direction of the card would be the nautral sitting position?

[Soap]

I find the pink to be a poor substitute for eyes, I'm afraid and doesn't fit with the overall colour scheme of the card, regular eyes would look great, i think (brown eyes)

[Bloodshot]

What the hell is wrong with irregular rofl? and how is brown regular dude lol, DE is out of the ordinary maybe lol? i donno... but still dont say "regular" made me mad =(

oh yeah DE I understand, but you should have like two sides =P show the back side all your information *cough credit card number so i can have it cough* but yeah =PP

[Deadloader]

It's a nice design i just couldn't see it being practical.. i mean sure art is about the art right but for business purposes.. which is it's main function, the text is too small people would see it and be like ooo.. pretty picture.. and not realise it's a business card, the colour on it, contrasted so it would attract attention, but then the pink detracts from the name.

People who remember the card would think.. "bright pink eyes.. err wait what was it advertising again?"

so the tag is a logo.. but again how? it's not very understandable to people, the main problem is this is a good creative piece but business wise? it doesn't meet the public in a kind of middle section where they can understand it and it expresses what you do. The public on a basic level are idiots, they see the card and only if they're in a select section would they really think into it and explore the card but not everyone has the time to look at this and see what it's about and so that doesn't make them stupid they're just human. It's definately nice though, can't dispute that. Just not functional.

[Daemon]

I really like this like usual its different from ure normal pen work you added a nice bg with some good colors to the b&w. Nice curves i love it.