Mildly Improved...?

[Lordemir]

Dunno if this one is better than the previous, but i tried some feathers ;P

[Tie Ninja]

uh. i like the other one better. this one has some werid color balance problems.
Makes the render look bad. the left side of the bg looks good but behind the render
on the right it looks like a totally different stlye.

[Drolaw]

what tie said and also you need to blend the render in aswell. Liking the text though