Alicia Keys

[Lordemir]

Whew! Finally done. I spent quite some time doing this one. Went through 3 different versions before finding something i liked.



c.n.c plz

[Garis]

mmm... I LOVE IT... <3
really good job.
I love text... BG is also amazing
dunno any words so say bad about it
everything goes so together.. <3
nice job...

and maybe tut, please?

[MartinBabies]

I feel that the text is a bit randomly placed. But I like how it is pretty discreet. I also think the render looks a little bit oversharpened. There is some pixelation in there. I would also have placed the render a little bit more to the left to help the composition. When she is looking to the right it feels a bit "unnatural" to place her in the middle.
But the colors and background are well made. Focal point is easy to find and overall it looks pretty good. And I don't know shit about signature trends and stuff so I just give my criticism as if it would have been a photograph, hehe. But it should be pretty much the same thing, wouldn't it? Good job!

[tunafish69]

Ya, I agree with martin, the render should be about a 1/2 inch to the left, maybe more.

It looks a little over-sharpened

Everything else looks pretty good.

If you asked for a rating, I would give it about a 7.5/10

[Daemon]

It looks good but the others have already pointed things out a bit to sharp but not much, also the text as martin says looks random placed. But overall a killer sig nice job

[Lordemir]

thx for the comments
as soon as i get the time ill try to fix it with the suggestions

[Papa]

I agree with all the above nice job. The only crit i have that hasn't been said is get rid of the scan lines if ya can. It's really killing the sig for me.

[Lordemir]

oh i already did that like 5 min after i had finished everything lol
i thought i had posted the one without scanlines though

[Papa]

oh i already did that like 5 min after i had finished everything lol
i thought i had posted the one without scanlines though

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