My First Vector

[s0ggywaffls]

Original:



Whatcha think? Any tips?


It's actually for my IRB Book Report on The Lost World, so any tips on effects, anything I could add to make it look finished. It's one of the biggest projects for this semester, so it has to look good...

PS:
Wow, this half of the school year went by so fast o.O

[TheWarzone1]

nice. i love vectors because of the amount of time it takes to do them. kinda like pixel art lol. my suggestion though is to pick colors more closer together so it has a better flow

[WTHAI]

IMO, it's too structured. It looks like a Flash vector. It needs to flow with the body.

[Tastyfish]

Its a good start but the overall anatomy of your original raptor seems weird, the tail and its feet are really weird, not to mention its claws thats pointing up into the sky.
Raptors had huge curled claws so that they could grab/rip their prey.

But the vector is a decent starting point, to bad you didn't have a good original :/.