2nd attempt at a C4D sig...

[TheWarzone1]

...and killed by crappy text.

[cC.Aleksander]

Actually not bad.. Blend render a bit more i think... Do something with the text and placement...

[Daemon]

This isnt bad but there isnt a defenition of c4d sig. just because you use a c4d in your sig you dont need to build up the entire bg from it.

But i would say it needs a bit more blending and also a new text cus the text is to strong. stick to defaults abd drop those effects in it.

[Papa]

I don't really like the background it's too repetitive and looks...well like you simply duplicated it a lot. There are a bunch of foggy looking things over the render, and if you can get rid of those, they make it look sloppy. As far as the text goes, i would get rid of the scan lines and gradient, make it smaller and set it to a font like arial or veranda. It'll make it less noticeable and if you strategically place it in the sig it will blend in.

Sorry bud, if you need more help though just ask I'd be happy to show you 1 on 1.