Logo-Concept(not finished)

[louie chalk fingers]

This piece is not finished yet it's for A logo I'm creating, I have the basic look that I want, but I need some suggestions because I have to re do it my illustrator crashed before i could save the AI file....oppps oh well but this is what i had, C&C (the horns make it look like an animal I'm thinking of deleting them)

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I like the horns, gives it a more primal, wild, beastly look (Unless that's not what you're going for). But I do think that if you are going to keep them, they need to be moved further up on the head. It makes it look like it has really point eyebrows. But other than that, I think it's pretty cool. Maybe make the eyes a bit smaller too? The expression lines above them is cool, but the eyes don't quite fit them.

Keep it up.

[louie chalk fingers]

thank,

this is really like my first try at digital inking and coloring and all that good stuff I think I did an alright job, the horns yea I was thinking maybe move them or make'em smaller if not just removing them, the eyes yea i dont really like them I kinda put them there til i could figure out what to do with them, but i needed something to make it stand out.

thanks again