Varanzano bridge and Street

[Papa]

Both these shots are black and white. I took these with digital camera, because at the time of the shot i hadn't had my Canon eos 350d. I think i went way to heavy on the vignetting, but i kinda like it..:\. I shot these in new york and i would love any and all comments.
This first shot is on dev art.
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The second one is pretty dark because i was trying out a new thing with channels. In all of my time doing Graphics i never really figured out how to properly use them :\.

Thanks guy.

[Grumpylump]

I love the second! I agree, you went OTT with the vignette, but the compo is really good. I think some parts are a little too dark. It would be especially good if i could read what it said on that sign "Hollywood shoe repair". Also, too much contrast. Can't see much of the detail on the street.
Overall, these two are mint photos!

[cC.Aleksander]

Second one is awesome and overdid the vignette a bit. But looks good anyway
first one doesn't do it for me... dunno why. But still, good photo

[robgasm]

Second shot is awesome, good street photography but I dont like the vignetting.

[Papa]

Thanks for the input guys, i edited them both so I'd like to here what you think now.