Into the dark from the light

[CyBeN]

I know the text sucks:P I will change it later, Im just too tired know:P

I hope you still like it

v2

[Papa]

WOW! That is your best yet!!!
Your flow is absolutely perfect. the way you blended the C4'ds into the smoky looking stuff is awesome. The lighting is great along with blending.

However, the coloring needs a bit of work the orange-yellow stuff near the top left is really and ugly color and doesn't go well. I suggest changing it to a green or pink or FULL yellow. Besides that the coloring is bomb.

Lol however the text is killing it for me. I applaud you for trying as it looks like you starting to pick it up, however you just haven't got it yet.
You used default fonts, the coloring is nice, i think the only place you went wrong is the placement. I would just re-arrange the way you have the text and then it'll be better.

Current it.

[Assaulting]

____AWESOME
____Masterpiece
____Astonishing
____Z
Adm I rable
__G N arly
OM G

Couldnt think of anything for "Z" :P

Amazing mate, her hair flows so smoothly
The lighting is good i suppose, could be better,

9/10

[nazz]

thats actually so good.

[tunafish69]

Awesome bro.

[+mw.kira]

I'm kinda familiar with the stock so not impressed at all. The effects are messy too that it creates a Random flow in the left. it looks just smudged imo, haven't seen your recent tags so i cant say if that's your best or not lol

Also, if you're going to look at carefully the c4ds and your stock, it doesnt blend that much. Improve your color blending too imo, and yea work on the text mate, good job though. Just not feeling the tag ^^

[CyBeN]

Thanks a lot for your comments!
I really appreciate it
Well here is v2, i don't know if it is better now.
I didn't really know how i should change the color.
And if the text still isn't in the right place, than where should i move it?


Thanks a lot!

(Please change the topic title I fucked it up:P)

[Assaulting]

Can you put them closer together? i cant see the difference when i have to scroll down the page

[Garis]

awesome work anyway man ;]
love this one,
but text sux ;D

[Assaulting]

prefer V2 myself