Ratchets ironman sig

[ratchetnclank]

I know there have been a few about, but after seeing immortals it inspired me to do one.

Heres my effort :


Cnc would be appreciated.

[nazz]

needs lighting,
needs some blending.
more depth, as the bg is just boring and flat. and the render is too dark.
but your text is pretty decent.

[Papa]

It needs a lot of blending. The text isnt too bad. It definitly needs a lightsource though, its way too dark.

[Fur]

well prety much nazz said it all keep on keeping on :-P

[Immortal.]

blend it in..urs is sweet
good job man

[ratchetnclank]

I'll try and fix it tonight.

[Sp!t]

better blending and light...sig si too dark

[ratchetnclank]

V2:



Any better?

[Immortal.]

a bit..again..blend it in more..
and i think you should lighten up the render more..
dodge tool it..

[Fur]

still way to dark, blend it a little better and work on the light source a little