Every hero has a story.

[ratchetnclank]

cnc?

[Papa]

Ermm, I'm not quiet feeling this one ratchet. It's okay, but i've definetly seen better.
I see little/no blending around the guy. Sure the background is colored like him but it isn't really enough for me.

The background is really flat, and i don't really see the point of the tiny swirly thing at the bottom left. The coloring looks good and the lighting looks okay.

The text..I'm not quite sure how to address this. It's about average however usually you do much better, take your optimus prime sig, perfect text IMO.
This just has too many words, try to keep it down to around 4 max i'd say.


The sig is actually really a solid sig, it's just very plain to me..That's it. i couldn't figure out why i felt indifferent to this but it's because it's just kind of plain.
I think you mostly just need to work on effects ratchet. You have everything else nailed, although you stumble sometimes on text, you really have everything going smoothly if not perfectly except effects.

[ratchetnclank]

Ermm, I'm not quiet feeling this one ratchet. It's okay, but i've definetly seen better.
I see little/no blending around the guy. Sure the background is colored like him but it isn't really enough for me.

The background is really flat, and i don't really see the point of the tiny swirly thing at the bottom left. The coloring looks good and the lighting looks okay.

The text..I'm not quite sure how to address this. It's about average however usually you do much better, take your optimus prime sig, perfect text IMO.
This just has too many words, try to keep it down to around 4 max i'd say.


The sig is actually really a solid sig, it's just very plain to me..That's it. i couldn't figure out why i felt indifferent to this but it's because it's just kind of plain.
I think you mostly just need to work on effects ratchet. You have everything else nailed, although you stumble sometimes on text, you really have everything going smoothly if not perfectly except effects.

Yeah i know what you mean on this. I was trying to get depth, the render was well blended until i added depth as soon as i do that it goes. It really annoys me. Got any tips for this.

Yeah effects are a little hard too, and i guess i did just stumble on the text.

[Daemon]

Well was first stroke me was that the bg looks very flat and boring needs a bit more details, also the text, i think your main prop there is the font and the colorss of it.