Nocturnal Dream

[GfxMgx]

My First Exposition in this forum

Hope You Like It :lol:



PD: Made In Photoshop 7.0

[Monx]

its pertty cool..the text tho....ick

[imported_Jack]

Id say first of all, dont make it all one color. Vary the colors a lot more. Second, tone down the contrast. Stay away from the lense flares, theyre... cliche lower the sharpness (the stars are almost jaggy). Diversify your brushing a bit, some of it looks like it was all done with the same sized brush at the same level of flow. That planet there has some stars on top of the shadowed part, might wanna fix that because stars are much larger than planets so if there was a star in front of a planet you wouldnt be able to see the planet if you get what im saying. You need to add a bit mroe stars in some places and take away some in other places. Lessen the amount of bright stars you have and after that, around each bright star, lessen the amount of little stars in its immediate area because something really bright closer to you sorta "drowns" (for lack of a better word) out things giving off light behind it that arent as luminescent. As for the typo, not the best choice. Id say something simpler, and in fact what would look really nice and clean is to do a thin white strip around the whole pic (like 1-2 pixels thick) and then have a thicker black border (about 75-100 pixels thick) and then have the typo centered at the bottom of the black border and use something like Times New Roman (clean sarif fonts look good with space scenes). Work on that and post another version

[GfxMgx]

Wow!
Ok, I will work on it

Thanks for the comment

[fishymaN]

bassicly jack said everything i wanted to say

biggest thing would be to vary the colors m8!

[aplix]

Originally posted by Jack@Jun 22 2005, 01:42 AM
Id say first of all, dont make it all one color.* Vary the colors a lot more.* Second, tone down the contrast.* Stay away from the lense flares, theyre... cliche * lower the sharpness (the stars are almost jaggy).* Diversify your brushing a bit, some of it looks like it was all done with the same sized brush at the same level of flow.* That planet there has some stars on top of the shadowed part, might wanna fix that because stars are much larger than planets so if there was a star in front of a planet you wouldnt be able to see the planet if you get what im saying.* You need to add a bit mroe stars in some places and take away some in other places.* Lessen the amount of bright stars you have and after that, around each bright star, lessen the amount of little stars in its immediate area because something really bright closer to you sorta "drowns" (for lack of a better word) out things giving off light behind it that arent as luminescent.* As for the typo, not the best choice.* Id say something simpler, and in fact what would look really nice and clean is to do a thin white strip around the whole pic (like 1-2 pixels thick) and then have a thicker black border (about 75-100 pixels thick) and then have the typo centered at the bottom of the black border and use something like Times New Roman (clean sarif fonts look good with space scenes).* Work on that and post another version

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woah big post

[imported_Jack]

its how i do things

[Kubalivre]

Is that brushes? Looks good.

[GfxMgx]

Yes. The pack of brushes is called "Night Sky". You can find it in deviantart.

[C K]

Originally posted by Jack@Jun 24 2005, 12:27 AM
its how i do things

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Yeah I did the indepth C&C as well when I got here..then I got lazy I guess. :lol:

Jack pretty much had it right with what he said.

But that brush pack thing bugs me...Next time do it with your own brushes or maybe defaults, because on something like this, well everything, it will give it a much more orignal look to it, and its really not much harder to do with defaults.