Might as well show something...

[Kite]

I hate the text but I do think I'm getting better with text.



And you could say something about my current if you want....

[narcosynthesis]

Well as I said about the current ebfore I dont like the text rest is nice, and the enw one is really nice. Text is ok but you are improving it nice job man

[Kite]

Yes I really need to work on my text.

I might try to fix the text up on this...

Anything else wrong with it?