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Thread: New sig

  1. #1
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    I have a battle in other forum and I need your review about this sig
    Plz tell me what to improve here

    V1:


    V2:


    Wait to your comments

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    Whats the other forum? the only reason I ask is because if its one like this, then that border is fine. Otherwise, never use octagonal shapes, theyve been trendwhored for a couple years now. Get rid of the vertical scanlines. That typo is really bad, it looks bevelled and... just for future reference, keep typo simple. Dont overdo it, makes it look like crap. I think its strange how one car is going forward and another is backward. Towards the front of the car on the right, it fades out in a strange way, I think you should fix that. Put them in an environment like a track (obviously blend them there, add shadows to match light sources etc.) and youll have a much better sig. Also, I suggest if you do what I said, then you should take away that border, but again that depends on the forums... Newer forums tend to go for that kind of thing, and looking at that sig, it looks like the border will look good to them. Forums that have been around for awhile don't advocate that. From a design point of view, the octagonal shapes are a no no. Anyway, enough of that rant To finish up, the cars were rendered with different styles in mind so they dont go together very well. You need more color variation. The microtext in the bottom left isnt helping anything either, looks strange.

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    Tough critic
    ghehe

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    Originally posted by Jack@Jul 1 2005, 07:34 AM
    .... To finish up, the cars were rendered with different styles in mind so they dont go together very well.* You need more color variation.* The microtext in the bottom left isnt helping anything either, looks strange.
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    Yea im agreed on that part

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    v2. is better/ the darker shade of green looks better imo. i like the tech border at the top (good idea) although the text seems out of place (doesnt really look like street racing theme) and the tech brush in the bottom looks too blurry. overall i like it, GJ

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    I think Jack got it right but I also think you should get rid of the tech brush at the bottom.

    I like the its pretty good.

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