review me 1st grunge contest loser

[DinoKind]

Hey guys Well I entered this sig I made in a friendly battle over at NSL...and lost miserably

But I was wondering if you guys can help me improve and decide what I did wrong.



thx

[jerner]

The render is cool. But the brushing isn't, really. Everything in the bg looks kinda brutty to me, and I don't really like the color, I don't know if it fits the render.

One thing you could do is to blend the render into the bg, and maybe change the text effects/font. I like the idea with the transparent part, but you should try to make the axes less choppy, if possible.

Some improvement could be done on the upper edge, that fading. lol, that's what I would change, but the idea is cool, and you did quite a good job, keep it up.

[2-intenze]

the render is a bit pixelate in the popout area but the render itself is cool the other render, orc (i guess :blink: [Warcraft noob]) is cool too but i think u can find on internet some better orc-renders
but this is a quite nice sig keep up the good work!

8.2/10

[Relentless]

The only flaw I see in that is the text, you can barely see it!

[DinoKind]

Thx Ill see what Ill improve and do better next time