Could not agree more with Anachronism I mean it could be the render but your space is poorly used, text doesn't look good plus it is hard to read, and the bg color does not match the render at all.
typo is an expression used by some artists to say font and it is not my job to tell him how to fix it unless he asks, he asked for a rating so I gave him one.
Like fade to black said typo=typography. Plus I told him what was wrong with it. I'm not going to go step by step and tell him how to fix every little thing. I'm not a walking tut and most things you have to learn by yourself or go the easy way and read tuts.
Insane just play around and your learn everything you need to know. Sorry if I wasn't with the in depth C&C but really someone can't tell you how to become a good tagger. I would scrap this one and start over and try to mix things up a bit man. Try to get your "render" more involved in the sig itself and try to have every sig seem like its own space. Don't make everything fake. Don't brush an abstract background and throw a image on there. Abstract is fine but make sure your image is part of it so it seems like its own space. Good luck.
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