--monotone tekken sig--

[PP Bone]

v1
v2



v2: changed contrast, lowered text size, brushed more, and changed render blending

CnC appreciated, as always

[narcosynthesis]

I liek this alot, text could use some work, just font wise. Other than that its awsome. I like the coloring effect it looks smple maybe its not, anyways great job on it. I'd sat current

[imported_Jack]

I'm curious as to the "crack" by the guy's left collar bone. If you can, I suggest that you remove that little bit. I don't think there is anybody here that doesn't like color, but I like colors to be clean yet still punches you in the face when you see it (figuratively speaking of course ). The shade of green is a bit bland, it doesn't have as much flavor as I like to see in colors. I think it does work well, relative to the ambience youre trying to create and the feeling youre trying to send. I'll leave the typography alone (although, I dislike pixel fonts on most occasions, this being one of them). It'd be nice if you could surround the render just a little more, still leaving his collar bone and up moderately clean, especially the face (its requisite to have visibility of the eyes). When I say surround it a little more, don't just brush over it, make sure that it looks almost like the guy is running through a cloud of smoke/fog/mist or something like that. You don't need to smooth it out a ton, but it'd look better if the section in the top right (where its a dark green) was a little smoother and less rough. Don't make the brushing fade of super quickly on the left, make it a little more gradual, but you have it pretty well done now. That's about it for this one. Make some large work from scratch, I wanna see that

[PP Bone]

Thanks for the comments. And that idea of making the guy run through cloud is pretty tight, I'll give it a try.

[imported_crazzzy]

woah thats so good. i love it.

[aplix]

i think the text brings it down

[PP Bone]

Originally posted by aplix@Aug 2 2005, 12:22 PM
i think the text brings it down

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Any text tips are greatly appreciated

[Sobek]

Usually monotone sigs are **** but this is the shiznit!

[arson™]

Awesome sig dude, contrast is just perfect.

[aplix]

im really not sure bud thats y i didn't give any suggestions what about mayb setting the drop shadow opactiy to 100% then spread 0 then distance like 2 or 3 i do that sometimes and it works lol. I guess i just don't like the font :P