my first vector

[phatso]

it might look a bit simple but it took tones long now i understenad how hard it really is comments and raintgs and suggestions are very welcome and this is my first vector

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/6...oredcar3fq.png
please post if a broken link immediately

[Sobek]

Great for a first, bit choppy and jagged, and text needs work, but yeah, nice try

You obviously didnt do that back rim :P Looks too real to be a vector

[phatso]

well i didnt know howw to go about the back rim doing it and the choppyness is so hard to rid off any ideas how

[ZeekUnreloaded]

First, use the pen tool and create vector masks for each shape on new layers. Try the gradient tool when coloring each piece. (The eye dropper tool is your friend)

Second, use colors that blend well together. You have a wide array of colors going on there that doesn't feel or look right.