The Sun | Fiery Hell

[Sobek]

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Made 100% from scratch

CnC, Ratings, Which one is better? And Current?

[Proflax]

mmm, text is a bit too basic.., and its too plain, add stars to it and maybe lower the outerglow a tad..

[Airisus]

no flaws, except the text needs some improvement

nj nonetheless

[C K]

Like I told you text can never be to basic, but the color of it stands out to much. Make it yellow =p. Plus maybe some stars or something in the background.

[Quint]

no no no no no, the text is fine..and the color of the sun is perfectly fine. Ive noticed that you really like to make planets and such, and I used to as well. So maybe I could help ya. The sun looks good, but that outer glow just makes it look so fake. And wheres all those spikes and what not from the gas? Just tips to make it look realer.

With a few simple steps I got this from using your sun in probly a minute,


the stars look cheesy, but just to give you an idea..

ghost, pm me if you want those steps to make you planets look realer

[-Magla.]

yeee much better mate

[shodan]

i like quint's improvement