Another Update

[imported_Jakska]

Had a load of ideas... So I whacked them all into sigs because I am far too lazy to be making big art right now.













Please reply... I would much appreciate some comments (and hopefully some critisizm), and you know I comment on all of your stuff, so thanks in advance.

[kompakt]

hmm...good work on all of them, i like hte first 2 and the last one the best

now for the crit..

the third one, IMO, could use some depth, and perhaps more varied colors, or better use of the white and red.

on the 5th one, the text isnt quite aligned with the perspective of the picture you used.

on the second one, if you made that into like a cross section of a pipe, or made it look more like a pipe or a sewage line as in give it that rounded look. you started doing that with the black circle, and the yellow-orange around it, now finish the idea.

thats all i got, hope i helped

[static06]

All very original

Great job

Some crit: try some new styles, like w/o renders or anything

[extortion]

lmao @ second to last

[imported_Jakska]

Originally posted by kompakt+Sep 29 2005, 09:29 PM-->

hmm...good work on all of them, i like hte first 2 and the last one the best

now for the crit..

the third one, IMO, could use some depth, and perhaps more varied colors, or better use of the white and red.

on the 5th one, the text isnt quite aligned with the perspective of the picture you used.

on the second one, if you made that into like a cross section of a pipe, or made it look more like a pipe or a sewage line as in give it that rounded look. you started doing that with the black circle, and the yellow-orange around it, now finish the idea.

thats all i got, hope i helped

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Thanks for the comments The crit is especially useful.

Originally posted by Equal@Sep 29 2005, 10:23 PM
All very original

Great job

Some crit: try some new styles, like w/o renders or anything

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What do you mean without renders? There aren't any renders there, only stock photos.

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lmao @ second to last

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Are you laughing at the disabled? Anyway... That sig is to represent my current position, I have properly ****ed up my neck and I feel like I am handicapped. I can&#39;t move my head properly and I can&#39;t move to the right at all.

[Quint]

nice idea, see what you&#39;re goin for. Towards the middle right dosent look like it fits in, maybe try showing more of the plant? but the rest is nice looking

the 2nd one does look like a good concept I would continue working on it though

cant think of anymore crits but the last 2 I very much like

[static06]

Yeah jak, whatever... photos renders, same thing in my mind lol

[Contempt]

3 5 and 6 are the ones i like gj on them all tho

[Spid3r]

I like the last one.. and I love how you make the text seem right there with the pix on some other ones.....

[Wiseson]

They all look nice, the 2nd to last and the last are my fav&#39;s. Excellent work.