mouse painting...

[metacool]

long time im not here...well. i put this experiment ..this is only a bunch of tricks ..whit the mouse...
only painting a sketch....but im a novice in photoshop painting...
im learning.....yet....



regards from lisbon....

[silenced]

I love it. Really really, any stocks used? Cause that is rally really nice, I really look forward to more of your work, do you have AIM?

only complaint is it's too dark on the right(top)

[ZeekUnreloaded]

I like alot of the brush work (with a mouse that's pretty good). The vine sillouette looks good, as well as the city.

I have a problem with the way you executed the piece. Alot of techniques you used don't work well together.
- Scan lines aren't necessary
- Smudge work clashes with the sharpness of the city
- Alot of unnecessary blurring.
- The dark and light points in my own opinion don't work well together
- The landscape can use alot of work. Use the airbrush (or noise) to enhance the land, not create it.
- Colors can use some work overall.
- Get rid of the preset brushes!

Overall your piece has potential, just a few changes need to be made.

Good job doing something different around here.
Hope I was helpful.

[Death of a Clown]

Awww, I was expecting a mouse. >_>

Looks awesome, man. You've got some real talent.

[Lumix]

I don't really like the top right.. The left part of the vine seems to be blurred too.. But the rest is just awesome.. Great work..

[metacool]

Originally posted by silenced+Oct 18 2005, 04:37 PM-->

I love it.* Really really, any stocks used?* Cause that is rally really nice,* I really look forward to more of your work, do you have AIM?

only complaint is it's too dark on the right(top)

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thkz...idont have aim...but you can look at my spot and see other kind of stuff...lol..
just learning...to paint in photoshop.. B)


<!--QuoteBegin-ZeekUnreloaded@Oct 18 2005, 04:39 PM
I like alot of the brush work (with a mouse that&#39;s pretty good).* The vine sillouette looks good, as well as the city.

I have a problem with the way you executed the piece.* Alot of techniques you used don&#39;t work well together.
* - Scan lines aren&#39;t necessary
* - Smudge work clashes with the sharpness of the city
* - Alot of unnecessary blurring.
* - The dark and light points in my own opinion don&#39;t work well together
* - The landscape can use alot of work.* Use the airbrush (or noise) to enhance the land, not create it.
* - Colors can use some work overall.
* - Get rid of the preset brushes!

Overall your piece has potential, just a few changes need to be made.

Good job doing something different around here.
Hope I was helpful.

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youre right , i agree totally whit you, but like a told is just an experimental thing...learning from the mistakes is the point...
thkz a lot...that will help much...


thks ppl for he comments, soon i will post the evolution and i hope more stuff...
best regards from lisbon