Storm Gather's

[Wiseson]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24976710/
Worked on this forawhile, but not feeling to good about it.
Comment, +fav, or whatever.

[Chucks]

Not feeling this one. Doesn't look like a storm to me, with the BG so bright. The render in the middle is rather choppy as well. Not exactly what I was expecting from you :P Not sure about the super bright spots, doesn't look like a storm, looks like some kind of sci-fi movie of a UFO. Heh.
I know I won't be able to make something like that but come on
mate, you can do better than that! But nice render as a first try on C4D, way better than my first one

[Wiseson]

yeah I know *sigh* lol funny thing is im working on it more right now :lol: and yeah the render is choppy/spiky...bleh you know what I mean but my comp cant handle the hypernurb modifier so it says out of memory...x.x I need a better computer.....plus I need a new monitor..cant even tell if its bright or not :lol:

*Edited* Modified it alittle, hopes its alittle better.