Photographs // Meh noob

[Chucks]

OKAY OKAY, finally, I took some photos on a skyscraper called IFC (Internation Finance Center). This is my first time actually taking proper photographs so yup, I suck. Just three photos out of my best ten. Oh and I'm just posting to get your comments (Element, Silenced *nudge nudge*)

Here they are, in no particular order:
1st (Inside the building)


2nd (On the roof, 89th floor)


3rd (On the podium)


Still have a lot to learn from you guys. I'll be posting up some again tomorrow, will be taking photographs in Hong Kong Park

[.element]

The 2end one is hot

[Chriz]

agree with Snacksy they are good.

i'm no photographer so i cant give any comments on it , only the third one is a bit disturbing for me.

gj

[silenced]

What's with everyone changing their names? I've never changed mine, so therefore there's something wrong with you guys. This will probably be one of my last posts at CX, if you want, you can message me on AIM or MSN to get my forum, because that's where I'll be posting. aim=damn i rule13 , msn = silenced@reloaded-studios.net

1. The first one is over exposed, in the shadows, you can see some of the really grainy darkness, and that's bad, if you're using a manual camera, tap the aperture down a point or two. There is also not a supreme focus on it, it doesn't specifically try to focus or capture something specific, it's just sort of a picture, Get a better focus, and it could really work. I also don't really like where you put the framing on this photo, I think that you can exclude some parts, make it a unique shot, try to get a creative angle, it usually looks way better.

2. Element, or whatever your new name is, I don't think this is a hot shot. I think that it has a LOT of development possibilities, it's a very nice shot, but the croping again is un-natural, and there's not a specific focus, there's also no depth of field, which in my opinion may help it. Try to get some symmetry in the photo, you'd be surprised at how much it can add to a photo. The angle and the railing also are distracting, but it's an ok start.

3. I'm not really sure what you were trying to focus on, because there's not a good focus within the photo. It's just sort of there, and has no continuation within it. The coloring could use some work, the green in the background needs work, just because it's distracting. Again, it has potential, at least you went out on a limb to get that different angle, but I think it could definately work better.

Enjoy, spent a good amount of time writing these, and feel free to contact me.

[Chucks]

Thanks for comments, I'll watch out for the comments you said, thanks for helping me out

[Mangos]

they are pretty neat

i have this wicked spot behind my apartment its so hawt at noon WOOOOH WE SHIT looks like heaven

[Giuseppe]

Nice job 1st oen is nice