A Crappy Space Scene

[colin826]

Well, it's the first one I've done. And I didn't spend too much time on it.

http://img504.imageshack.us/my.php?i...version2uu.jpg

I'm going to guess that I need to improve everything.

[Spluff]

Mainly, I'd work on the reality of it. Make your planet more real, make your stars more real. And give your planet colouring.

[Lumix]

it looks ok.. more colour variation..

[static06]

Make it realer

[colin826]

Originally posted by MystiKal-@Nov 19 2005, 08:36 PM
Make it realer

[snapback]95762[/snapback]

And the award for vaguest C&C goes to...

Thanks everyone. I've been checking out this site for some of the basics. Of course if he made something that was a plain black box it would find a way to be much better than mine.

[D3vil]

Nice for first time, but lacks colors

[S-Gen.]

don't take this the wrong way:

space art isn't for everyone
and i don't think it's for you

[silenced]

(I think he means you're bad at it.)

The colors = blandzors.

[space-time]

For a first time, it's not bad...a bit more work and you'll be on your way, kid

[silenced]

he would know, because his name is space-time, and he's seen your work progress.

and he's from texas.


replace he with she.