Organic Radiance

[Wiseson]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25429520/
Comment, +fav, or whatever :P

[colin826]

I like the render, but the light flare in the middle doesn't look too good. I think something brighter and without so many of those 'squiggles' coming out of it would look better. But the render is great.

[myst]

Work on lighting. Right now its just all a mess with some really bad brushing in the middle. Come on spend more time on it and I know you can do better than that. Right now it needs a lot of work, and I know you can do it.

[Wiseson]

thx for the comments, Myst mind giving some good tips or anything, like how to make the brushing better or how should the lighting be? lol

[Spluff]

Mebbe a lens flare in the middle, with the lighting on the render actually rendered towards the middle.

I think it needs some empty space, some 'designer' room, instead of render everywhere.

BTW, the render is good, I couldn't make that. (Thats partially because my computer can't handle anything even a little bit big, but eh ).

Keep working!

[space-time]

the flare looks out of place, otherwise it looks great...

[Wiseson]

thx but I soon realize now that it sucks lol, got alot to learn about abstract art. My head hurts already trying to figure out how to use stocks in a piece and doing all these certain effects x.x;;...anyone know how to make water droplets, and make them seem like there driping into a puddle?

[Tikkitang]

mmm liek myst said the lighting isnt nice, the the electrix stuff doesn't look real

the shades of green you choose in someparts look "cartonnish" and don't give off the 3d, solid feel

[D3vil]

Cool one, lense also looks fine