v3 best out of all of them. But still your current is way better. There's definately place for improvement. The text on the first two signatures kills the whole work. Some parts of the lighting isn't correct and on the right hand side (I know there's suppose to be light coming from here but..) it's a bit too bright. BG's a bit dull and boring plus BG needs a bit more depth. Nice try though, keep going!
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