Its an Animal City

[Frappy]

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I know its not wonderful, but some comments and suggestions for future pieces? Please, please, please -- want to know what y'all (who do brilliant work - meaning all of you) think.

This is based off the new Shakira song, Animal City, BTW.

[Frappy]

I guess its not that good, eh? Any comments at all??

[Spluff]

Work no your text, and make it less busy, its far too crowded and there is too much happening. Try adding a focal point and some lighting effects to bring that focal point in.

[sythe]

it's too frantic and the text is crap need to be completely changed