Smudgin' it up

[Buchanan]

I think it turned out ok for my first attempt. C&C please.

[aka_SFX5]

i think thats not bad for first try, at least you have some good flow in it. i personally think it looks kinda strange coming from her ear, id say do it from her waist. add some more shapes maybe in the bg to enhance the flow and sharpen some areas

[Buchanan]

Lol, It isn't coming from her ear it's actually coming from behind her waist if you look closely. Anything else?

[m3mph!s]

not too bad for a first attempt. although you say it comes from the waist, it looks like it comes from the ear because the hair on the left is behind the smudge. the left side of the render looks a bit pixelated but i get that when i cut out hair too. gj overall