Surface

[Sobek]

CnC?

[Spluff]

It's pretty nice, give a little bit more negative space, like in the bottom rleftits almost pure colour but theres a bit of the render there which needs to go.

[phatso]

thats nice bit blury still looks good like the suttleness

[Lumix]

Get rid of the stuff at the sides and the grain..
Make it focus on the material at the centre and it'll look better..

[.element]

an abstract render would fit good in it to give it more depth the colors are pretty nice.. I like