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    Looks awsome!!
    Sweet a*s colors and depth! :lol:

    GJ

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    As I said before, work on the realism and lighting of the planets, ATM they look a little fake. They could probably do with a better texture also, but the one they have isn't that bad.

    I like the starfield .




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    the starfields need colour too...
    and the bottom part of the planets.. you've erased too much,,

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    It feels as if the starfield has nothing to do with the planets. That's what I feel when I look at it, the planets doesn't look like it's in with the starfield. Not sure if anyone else feels that but...

    Good work though, me like most of it. Just the planets..


    <3 Fuzzy

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    Awsome !! I love how it get&#39;s bright where the two planets "Eclipse".

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    ok

    what is causing that big light blast between the planets?
    that&#39;s my main problem, is again the lighting is not logical
    also, the planets fade way too suddenly, and into the stars. if you look, around where the red one fades, there are stars there, which would techinically be impossible. when a planet fades, it does not disappear, rather that part just becomes a silhouette. so if stars are behind it, they would still be hidden from view.

    also, above the planets, it looks like you accidently clicked with some downloaded brush, i can&#39;t tell what kind

    also the clouds don&#39;t make sense to be in outer space. i haven&#39;t researched this part, but i&#39;m pretty sure there can&#39;t be clouds without an atmosphere, so take out the clouds

    also, as said before, the planets need to be better textured. add some colors, some depth, details such as clouds, lights, water

    furthermore, rather than using downloaded star brushes, make your own star field. it&#39;s not hard at all, and it looks much better, and you can do much more with it -- alyn has a tutorial if you need

    actually any downloaded brushes should just be thrown out. the sooner you stop using them, the better. your art will improve drastically upon doing so. put this with correct lighting, exstensive effort on textures and details, and a creativity, your space art could be something to remember

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    I like it gj +fav

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