4 Shirt Designs

[System-ED]

1st one:


2nd one:


3rd one:


4th one:


Well, I've been getting really inspired from the T-Shirts of the band The Chariot. And since I'm getting a band together, I thought I'd just try out some design stuff for shirts. i think its pretty neat. Its not supossed to be all crazy and wack, its supossed to be artsy and simple.

What does everyone think? If you could give me some constructive critisism and not just "Dude that so awesome!" If you're thinking about saying stuff like that... don't bother posting. I want comments that will help me improve on it.

[Falcata]

wow nice i love them id rate 10/10 looks a bit like the used

i think u should use like a big piece of paper to put on a shirt for that cuz if tis just gonn abe like a normal sized piece of paper and u print on the shirt its gonna look a bit weird.. sexy designs, and no crit

[mindfields]

oh man..these are awesome!

[System-ED]

Originally posted by Falcata@Dec 28 2005, 11:51 AM
wow nice i love them id rate 10/10 looks a bit like the used

i think u should use like a big piece of paper to put on a shirt for that cuz if tis just gonn abe like a normal sized piece of paper and u print on the shirt its gonna look a bit weird.. sexy designs, and no crit

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Well, the sizes are gonna be a good size on the shirts.

[BustA]

they look nice man, and would look exellent as a t-shirt. but all it is is a few d/led brushes am i correct?. still looks nice 2nd and 4th my faves.

[System-ED]

Yeah, all it is, is downloaded brushes. But, I'm just at the start of this. If I keep doing it more, I'll start making my own.

[`Kakashi]

dude they are really good. i love the splatter effect on them. think u could send me the brushes?
EDIT: number 3 is ure ebst i think

[cloud260]

wow they are really nice, id buy 1 if i had the chance

[System-ED]

Well, I'll let everyone know if I ever get them printed.. ( of course with permission from Metal)

[sythe]

i think that you should work on your text placement on the design i think #3&4 have the worst text placement it just doesn't look good to me, change where the text is.

and off topic but shouldn't this be in other art?