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[`Kakashi]

most of u know that ive been doing abstract smudge for a while, i decided to give it a grungy look and color it a different way and add a render. tahts waht i came out with. pretty good for an experiement i think.

c'n'c please

[HippY]

i like it...gud colours, n the render fits well...but i think there is something missin, i cantg figure out what tho, i'll get bak to you..lol

[`Kakashi]

kk thanks bro ^_^ i wanan hear what you thinks missing. i wanna improvex0rs alotx0rs

[HippY]

right dunno this is just my opinion, but i think if you move the whole render n back to the right a lil then in the dark section seperated by the gap i think you shud place another focal point. not sure what but i think something dark n shiny

[`Kakashi]

kk im taking this into consideration

[C K]

I dislike the way you blended the stock, also the background could use a bit more flare its pretty boring right now. Other then that its okay.

[`Kakashi]

any tips on how to do so?

[C K]

Not really. Play around with it.

[deathrow_]

i like it too but wasnt this juss copied form a video tut? sorry if im wrong but it looks good

[sythe]

i'm with CK don't like the blending, and i think the size is too big and that thre is too much black