C&C pls

[deathrow_]

my first render i showed u guys...um hopefull this turns out okay.. and if u nodice that on his sleeve is some shit i took that oiff wit my mad ps skillz :P take a look


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[deathrow_]

hmm 14 veiws an not one of them could leave a 5 second comment...i see how it is

[sylent]

its a bit choppy, if u havent already u should learn cutting with the pen tool

[deathrow_]

that thing confusses the **** outa me lol im olddd school but that was juss a quick polygon one for a sig i did mabye later when i find them i will put the ones from my site up those i took my time on ohh well thansk for the comment

[aplix]

im the same man can't stand the pen tool use it for logos some times and make stuff by fluke lol. On the render: its a bit choppy but gud for a 1st attempt

[Mr.Black]

Yea his arms a little choppy.

Overall it's good.

[re-reborn]

thanks

[911dave]

hmm u got rid of the bit of "shit"(confety) on his shoulder but what about the bit on the title belt its a bit choppy to

[Chaotic]

right side (left arm) is choppy but everything else is good

[TanakaYukio]

A bit choppy but still good job=]