Unibirth

[Metal]

OMG. DeviantArt is so slow, giving me tons of problems.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/28040044/

hope you like.!

[HippY]

at the minute its gud, adding some slight brushing over the render would make it better...

hippy

[Spluff]

Nice simple concept with clean execution but I'd like to see a bit of brushing in the swirl .

[myst]

Needs better effects, and maybe try adding color. Pretty Novice looking right now, could be a lot better.

[Spid3r]

its alright, but some parts look a bit wierd to me... but thats just me...

[Sobek]

Pretty boring, and has no colour. Not interesting.

[sythe]

it's ok, the render looks flat and square, did you put a hypernerb on it?, if not i think you should, i think it is ok but you need to do some more stuff to make it "complete", and i think the birder is too thick.

[Kyoushima]

plain, monotone, just not enough details