Rate please

[Hitsugaya24]

hey, just got C4D and tried my hand at a abstract sig, id be happy if u all would rate it and give me sum tips, i have no clue what to do to it lol

[Heron]

I like it, the render and the colors look nice. Good job, keep it up.

[ScaX]

cool, im not likin the light bars above and below the text.. id like to see it without those. the text itself is nice..like the color theme and no complaints on the render.. overall id say its a good job

[sythe]

lose the text doesn't go with the rest of the sig

[Eternal]

text is the only problem/

[Kyoushima]

imo the render should be blended more, text ruins too