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[.exploited]

here is a vector piece i made moments ago, many hours went into this pice, so please comment/+fav.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/30261092/

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[imported_Jack]

Its tiny :blink: I think the definition of vector has come to be silhouettes of people and splatters... Using the silhouette of a person has gotten really overused. And I can see those splatter brushes :P My guess is that its not actually vector, but we wont get into that. I'm thinking you need to rework the typography. The font and the way the L and S are tilted is really random. I like the sky though.

[.exploited]

thanks for cnc, anymore?

[sythe]

agree with jack, and it's ok, the silhouette isn't great though, i think that oragny cloloured splatter on the sun should be an erased splatter from the sun, if you know what i mean.

[phatso]

you spent many hours on that,looks alright not too bad but is a bit trend whorey

[Sobek]

Very small....and that style is way overused, and still only a minimal amount of people can use it in a way that looks good.

[.exploited]

thank you for your individual criticism, anyone else?

[Seki]

Originally posted by Jack@Mar 12 2006, 10:00 PM
Its tiny :blink: I think the definition of vector has come to be silhouettes of people and splatters... Using the silhouette of a person has gotten really overused.* And I can see those splatter brushes :P My guess is that its not actually vector, but we wont get into that.* I'm thinking you need to rework the typography.* The font and the way the L and S are tilted is really random.* I like the sky though.

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Agree with Jack here - he got it all in one.
Take some more time on typography, find an article on it perhaps, - should be as important as the image.

[.exploited]

could you help me find an article on it? it would be a big help

[imported_Jack]

Uh what the hell?

http://www.deviantart.com/view/30261092/

http://www.deviantart.com/view/20314229/

You copied it extremely closely. You even tried to duplicate the bottom two corners....

Care to explain the extreme lack in originality?