Need some help with this one

[Aadi]

Okay I just did this one. I like how it came out, but IMO it feels too rough. How would I go about making it look better?

[Slim]

remove some of the brushing layers on the right maybe? use some softer brushes, maybe some dirt and dust type of brushes would work better than whatever was used on the right side. also the text is really hard to read, i would make it more noticable or something. good sig though, but it could use some work.

[.exploited]

too monotone for me, i didnt even notice the render for a moment. as slim said, chang the brushing to like metals "grungnrust" or somthing...just a thought.

[Kyoushima]

Originally posted by Slim@Mar 22 2006, 05:52 AM
remove some of the brushing layers on the right maybe?* use some softer brushes, maybe some dirt and dust type of brushes would work better than whatever was used on the right side.* also the text is really hard to read, i would make it more noticable or something.* good sig though, but it could use some work.

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slim summed it up pretty nicely!

[Aadi]

Alright thanks, I'll give it a shot.

[Aadi]

Two different edited ones...

[.exploited]

first edit looks alot better, but try and add more texture kinda. and diff color if you want, but still good

[Aadi]

I really need to get some more brushes lol...Added some green as well.

[BustA]

my eyes

[Em][n3m]

C+C retard, C+C.
No wonder you no more are a mod.

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The first edit looks best so far together with the green one.
Don't brush so much over the render.