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Kind of a comic book lookie?
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Ok, you have yourself a decent signatre here.
The stock itself is not to oversharp, yet the rest of the sig if full of oversharpened edges. I understand that It was the effect you were going for, but I believe that for the stock to flow with the background, they need to be on the same page if you know what I mean. Now, look at the flow of the white spot on the bottom middle. It goes from its position, outwards in all directions on the signature, yet the bg is only going in one direction. Maybe try to make the bg flow with other parts of your signature next time.
I can see the red showing through on the stock, but there should be hints of yellew, and the peachy color of clouds skin showing through on the bg as well, even if it is hardly noticable.
Now, the text itself is not so great, but the placement of it is pretty good. If you look, there is no white in that part of the bg, but white everywhere else in the bg, so the white text takes the place of the white spots in the bg. The font choice for this is not the greatest though. Once again, back to the white blob bottom middle, where it is spreading outwards, maybe you could rasterize the text layer, and on a low opacity smudge with a scatter upwards on the text, giving it the matching flow of the white blob bottom middle.
good job, and nice effect here, I think that you accheived what you wanted, but the overall outcome was not infact superb, but indeed a good try.
Nice work.
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Wow, I think this is one of the best replies I've ever gotten. Thanks a lot man, definitely appreciate it.
As for oversharpening him, I kinda didn't wanna do that as it would take away from the visibility. And the rest of the background, it's just a bunch of different filters. Ink Outlinees, Dark Strokes...whatever else. Thanks a lot for the commen tho. I agree with the text, I need to work on that...need some kinda outline to follow. Eh...as for the white spot, it was supposed to be coming from below him, but now that I look at it, I agree, it doesn't really fit with the rest of the direction of the background.
Again, thanks a lot man.
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Damn Roofus kinda said everything...lol, i like the concept alot, the text does spoil it, try wat Roofus said and lets see wat you get :P
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