luck

[roofus]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/37892634/

my last graffiti i did not recieve ONE comment over like 5 forums... :/

anyways, cheers

[Kage89]

not feelin it

[static]

its too colorful and kid like

[JMX]

i think its a good start, try and look at how other graffiti artists lay out there letters tho, so u can see how to give spaces when its needed cos its kinda illegible, and theres not really any flow in the words, but keep trying