badHABIT

[Xobile]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41828326/

comments appreciated

[imported_Jack]

I love the concept. I like the piece a lot actually. Though, there are a few things to change. Mainly I'd just fill up more of the area with the "smoke." That, clean up the area around the tip of the cigarette, and do a little something more with the background. For example, have a really dark concrete wall on the left side where his face is and have it fade to black towards the right. Nice job being a different with the type of abstract that I see all too often

[static]

Do what jack said

[Kyoushima]

Imo it looks great, gj

[Sobek]

Wow, I love this, although it's disappointing you didn't at least make the C4D.

[Light]

Cool idea man! I like the piece a lot!

[~FireTap]

Give the C4D a more blurred and smokey feel. It looks to rigid as is, and doesn't look complete.