Excalibur

[Toshiyan]

Well I think I got what I was wanting with the pen tool XD.

C&C Appreciated.

[ev1]

Looks nice, good job with the pen ;p it doesnt really go with the rest of the concept but it gives it this feeling of "different"
The third line of text is too damn hard to make out, but that could easily be me(i like the way you arranged the text). Also the render should be a little bit more sharp
And. Is she holding a sword? Hard to see. I'd suggest making the brushing in the lower part a tad subtler. The top part is great.

edit: also, the negative area, i'd suggest a really dark shade of blue-gray-ish, not #00000

[Toshiyan]

Thanks, for the sword, she is holding one but it's really invisable XD.



Thats as much as there is of the sword. In the series it's mostly invisable though. I'll see what I can do on the bg. Thank for the help.

[space-time]

Looks good, blends nicely, text works well, and I like the color. Nice job

[Kyoushima]

Blending is nice imo, but those dotted lines are nasty

[Lumix]

Dots kinda ruin the "serene" feeling..
Try softening the scatters as well

[static]

Rid of thy dots!