Hell series

[.heKtik]

What do u think i can improve on? I personally like the 2nd 1 best

[Rykiller]

First one the render isnt blended into the bg at all. the text is hard to read.the brushes look a bit choppy (could be my monitar)

Second one Mostly the same reasons. the text macthes the background.Then the subtext is still unreadable =(.The render doesnt go well and isnt blended with the bg. if you fix those things then i bet you'd have one kick #$@ sig! :-)