sotw entry

[imported_bAy]

Here is my latest signature that i am entering in a sotw context in pr. So please could you give some good advice on what i should to do to make it better..thank you oh and its my first b/w signature..

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[Alpha Factor]

I like it myself. The shade scale is nicely done, gives it the depth so hard to gain with black and white sigs. Not like its truly that hard but yours is flowing nicely. To the right of the render there seems to be something distracting the crap out of me. I can't really tell what it is but there is something that is.

[imported_bAy]

k thank you! anyone else?

[imported_bAy]

UPDATED..

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[Smiling Demon]

the render needs 2 stand out more... wat i think is best for b&w sigs is 2 make it in colour and just convert 2 greyscale at the end... makes depth exectra easier.

[Bmc]

I disagree SmilingDemon, usually when you just convert to Grayscale you'd lose most of the depth that relied on color differences, and the image becomes mainly similar shades of gray. Building the sig as black and white from the start would bring better contrast and would be easier to plan.

As for the sig itself, it's great, but I think it's a bit too distorted, it's kind of confusing in the sides.

[Chucks]

I think the very first version looks the best out of the other 2vs you put up.

I think the text could be better but yeah, the rest is pretty much good. I can't quite put it into words but there's something in the tag that's missing or just don't feel right to me. o_O I'm weird.