birdman

[)85(]

looking at it now, i think i should add more brushing on the left side.

[BeaSt]

the sides are to dark to me

i also think the lighting could be better

[Bmc]

I like the effects, though if you could fix the lighting on the render, it seems the light source isn't the light down at the bottom but somewhere else.

[Chucks]

^ agree about light source and rid the text.

[Smiling Demon]

yeh loose the text... but the lighting isnt that bad... its from bellow him somewhere if you look at his face. but its pretty gd.

[)85(]

thanks. i tried to fix the lighting on his face but i couldn't come up with anything. i added very little brushing on version two(i'll post it later i don't have the url pasted on notepad right now). and to be honest. i'm lovin the text right where it is.

[Einsturzende]

You should add more colors/color-depth than just black, white and orange/brown. You should also color the background more than just seperately brushing with a color that is relative to the render.