2nd Sig

[Silviajdm]

Just something I whipped up....criticism is required please,

I also just realized that I forgot to add a border

[Smiling Demon]

1stly its far to big a canvas for a sig. i also feel the bluring is overdone. but mainly its the size. use a smaller canvas and read some tuts and you will improve.

[xDMXx]

hey, a bleach fan, awesome! ... as for the sig, the size definitly needs to be smaller and instead of blurring everything, maybe you could do a couple of filters or something in the bg. Nice work for your second tho! Bleach rules!

[dcn]

Far too big of a canvas for my tastes. Too much bluring is pulling me away from the focal. Work on your composition as well, along with depth by adding effects and coloring.

[DChild]

1. Far too big 2. But overall actually not too bad, keep working on it and use some tuts.

[Silviajdm]

thanx for the feeback guys....I made another one and I didnt want to waste bandwidth with another thread so let me know what you think of this one?

[Einsturzende]

Your new one is 3,000 times better than the title sig of this thread.

I don't think the render blends in well at all, but the background is great. Granted, it's not incredible (way too overcontrasted and lacks depth), and could use a lot of work -- but the improvement is monumental.

[Silviajdm]

Yeah I'm proud of the background but I just threw the render in to test my skills. I'm starting to get into blending alot more so I guess after a couple more sigs I can be up there with the intermediate guys

[Psymon]

nice nice
you have improved greatly

[Smiling Demon]

that is one huge leap from the first to the last. i still think your canvas is slightly big for my personal tastes. but if you can fill it then it doesnt really matter. sure you can use alot of improvement but you have come a huge way. btw work on blending.