Twilight heaven

[Quaggy]

my first like random arty smudge wit girls, lol

plenty c and c i kno it needs improvement, i don't like the lens flare to b honest, lol

[Jefster]

Here's what I think you should do. First extend the highlight so that it follows the curve of their faces. Try to line up the colour bands on the bg with the natural lines formed by the girls shoulders, clothing and so on. Then lower the opacity of the girl images. Then completely remove the taps, bath and the mirror. Then erase the back of both girls and smudge/clone stamp the bg across so that their shape is suggested rather than transposed onto the image, gradually becoming more evident and sharp towards the centre. Then use the clone stamp tool to remove the plaster. Then change the text.

[Smiling Demon]

errr yeh... err... listen to jefster XD. its not too bad tho... text needs alot of work. anyway keep practacing... and posting

[Quaggy]

ne advice on the text? lol, i felt it needed changin as well but am never really to sure about text, it's hard to find tuts that get text to blend wit nethin, normally my style is quite different from ne text tuts so it doesn't blend, lol, nehhoo thanks for the c and c mite go back and work on it a bit

[Smiling Demon]

cant really teach text tbh coz there is never a style that will fit every piece. you just have to muck around with it... change fonts, styles, colours, sizes and postions till you find something that looks good.

[Jefster]

Mostly, what SD said above applies, but this tut, although designed for sigs, has some useful tips you can use on almost any piece:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/38441798/

Thanks to Booms GFX since that's where I found this link.