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Thread: Harakiri

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    Default Harakiri

    from an older samurai movie tittled, obviously, harakiri
    which also means seppuku, a type of honorable japanese suicide
    lawlzorz






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    the vigilant and the virtuous." - V



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    konichiwa method-san. dat bg jawn is hawt. maybe move the focus up near the center.

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    work on your composition for thise piece. the focal needs to be higher and more over to one side.


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    (: PPPPINK!!!!!

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    it was an awkward render
    and there wasnt many other good renders cause its such a little known movie
    so i had to give up on the focal placement
    "The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain,
    for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate
    the vigilant and the virtuous." - V



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    I can understand having to work around the render, wish there were more renders to work with, I like the style, but it just seems off.



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    i think if u made it smaller in height and burned some bits to the left to give it more of a focal it wud look better

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