1 of my best?

[agertz]

V.1



V.2



V.3



i like it... CnC ?

[Smiling Demon]

colouring could use work, but ur best compo wise anyway.

[agertz]

updated first post (more V's)

[Smiling Demon]

v2 is the best, the sharpness helped.. but i still feel the colouring is too monotone.

[-DS]

missing deep, focal is all over the place, try to work on it
flow is quite nice but i would remove those digonal strips and re-edit text to something more toned