Better Things To Do? [LP]

[Smiling Demon]

http://smiling-demon.deviantart.com/...to-do-79822675

http://smiling-demon.deviantart.com/...to-do-79822675

Comments and fav's on DA welcome as always.

[Light]

the best thing to do with this piece would be cropping some of the negative space at the top, it's too much now.
I'd also suggest trying to overlay some electronic circuits to the background such as the one for the CPU or something like that, might add some interest to the piece.
Not bad at all right now.

[Smiling Demon]

i actualy think its that i didn't make my lines strech over enough of the piece.. coz i tryed cropping it, but it looked to squashed as a canvas size...

thanks anyway lol