Spidy sig :)

[markc4]

your comments are welcome

[Tenchido]

Very un-original. My only problem with it is that spiderman is very over used as a concept to base the sig around. The placement of the text makes a lot of sense as you can clearly see that the spidy-fool is looking at it. The only thing is that it seems a little blury and hard to read. A larger range of color and hue could also make the overall first impression a longer lasting one.

My suggestions to you are as follows:
Sharpen the font and make things less monotonage.

[markc4]

i think its fine, bud your right about the sharpen i post 1min with sharp

[markc4]

here maybe i have sharpen the render to much

[Tenchido]

Now what I was actually refering to when I said to sharpen something was the text. The overall image was at a good level of sharpness (?). Just the font needed to be sharpened in order to have it more easily readable.

[Papa]

Just the font needed to be sharpened in order to have it more easily readable.

Not so. I don't know if I'm looking at a separate version than you, however to make his text more readable he needs to make it bigger and also change it's blending to smooth.

Now i will say spiderman is overused. However that does not mean he cannot make a sig with it.

The blending is okay. IMO i think the background is a bit messy. mainly because you have some really blurry spots and some really sharp, but they don't seem to follow a pattern.

The text is okay but you need to make the spiderman text a bit bigger. I'm also curious to know why you didn't use the spiderman font, Homorahkan.

Finally i think you need to add a bit of depth in. try blurring the edges of the BG also if you have any c4d's in there, if you blur parts of them it usually owrks well also.
Not bad though, if you clean up the Bg it'd be a lot better.

[Immortal.]

sure its an overused render..however..u disply some nice technique that's good. NIce attempt and keep up the good work...use the same style on another less used render..then more people can see how ur style works.

[markc4]

agree with the render, i'm gonna make a other one next time i yuse now 400x150 for the canvas i think thats a little big whats a other good size?